Sunday, September 22, 2013

Message sent and delivered

This post has been selected as the WOW post!


And before I knew it, I had hit ‘Send’
'Send the message' had ruled my mind all day
Day went in much anxiety
Anxiety that had me keep everything else at bay. 

But once sent, the focus moved on to the wait
Wait for the reply, some answer, something
Something that will give a sign
Sign of a hope to hold on to some thing.

Answers and replies take time
Time to reach your phone and your heart
Heart then takes its own time to decipher
Decipher the codes, for a new start?



This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.

I have tried Loop Poetry for this post. Loop Poetry is writing 4 lines per stanza, last word of the line becomes first word of next line and it follows ABCB pattern of rhyming, that is last word of second line rhymes with last word of fourth line of a stanza.

9 comments:

  1. This is nice, Naina. Some things from an experience I reckon?

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  2. Oh thats called Loop poetry? Didn't realize while doing it till now :D

    PhenoMenon

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  3. Interesting, Naina! Loop poetry is fun.I particularly enjoy the humorous stuff.

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  4. A post with soo much deep insight Naina! A bigg hug to u gal.. u know for what!

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  5. Wow! That's a lovely composition! Good one! :)

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  6. Loop poetry, huh? Very interesting! Loved the message too. ♥

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  7. WOW! Loop poetry , I was not aware.and a lovely poem and indeed the heart takes its own time to decipher the codes.

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  8. Definitely, a beautiful poem. Congratulations for being picked up by Blog Adda:)
    Cheerz
    Vishal

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  9. Lovely Poem Naina...Am new to poetry world so thanks for sharing about "Loop poetry" & yeah congratulations...Indeed a wow post..:)

    http://sailorswiferamblings.blogspot.com/2013/09/chronicle-of-pirate-attack-survivor.html

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