Monday, July 08, 2013

Desert sand - Haiku


This Haiku has been written as part of the Haiku Heights prompt #262 - Sand


Image courtesy - Google Images

 

Golden desert sand
Soft and warm under my feet
Journey continues

 
Nip in the night air
Strange coolness in the same sand
I feel one with you

14 comments:

  1. Yoohoo! Naina I love haikus. Once you get the hang of them they are addictive. My office diaries are filled with haikus all over. They keep you hooked all the time :) and this one is such a nice one!

    Richa

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  2. I think people who cab write haikus are especially clever.
    Never been able to master them myself.

    Yvonne.

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  3. Nice one Naina...I love haikus too, they say a lot in just a few words. I have never attempted such. Good one!

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  4. Congratulations on your first successful attempt!

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  5. Loved it!! :)
    You have written it beautifully!!

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  6. Good one Naina :) :)
    I have never been brave enough to attempt a haiku... ever!

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  7. Wow Naina :) Good one :)
    As for me, I have never been courageous enough to attempt a haiku :P

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  8. Wonderfully written - loved it.

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  9. बहुत सुंदर रचना ....!!

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  10. aah ! could feel a cool breeze even in a desert due to this Haiku :)
    good one

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  11. The first haiku is so pretty, Naina! :-)

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  12. lovely! loved the lines..the rainy Haiku is good too :)

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