This Haiku has been written as part of the Haiku Heights prompt #262 - Sand
 | ||
| Image courtesy - Google Images |
Golden desert sand
Soft and warm under
my feet
Journey continues
Nip in the night air
Strange coolness in
the same sand
I feel one with you
Yoohoo! Naina I love haikus. Once you get the hang of them they are addictive. My office diaries are filled with haikus all over. They keep you hooked all the time :) and this one is such a nice one!
ReplyDeleteRicha
I think people who cab write haikus are especially clever.
ReplyDeleteNever been able to master them myself.
Yvonne.
Nice one Naina...I love haikus too, they say a lot in just a few words. I have never attempted such. Good one!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your first successful attempt!
ReplyDeleteLoved it!! :)
ReplyDeleteYou have written it beautifully!!
Good one Naina :) :)
ReplyDeleteI have never been brave enough to attempt a haiku... ever!
Wow Naina :) Good one :)
ReplyDeleteAs for me, I have never been courageous enough to attempt a haiku :P
These are both exquisite =)
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written - loved it.
ReplyDeleteबहुत सुंदर रचना ....!!
ReplyDeleteaah ! could feel a cool breeze even in a desert due to this Haiku :)
ReplyDeletegood one
The first haiku is so pretty, Naina! :-)
ReplyDeleteI loved it, Naina.
ReplyDeletelovely! loved the lines..the rainy Haiku is good too :)
ReplyDelete