Sunday, July 14, 2013

A 'Rainy' haiku





Hopeful eyes look up
Dark cottony clouds hover
Mid day sky marvel





Smell of wet earth soothes
Raindrops looking like crystal
Parched feet long to dance






8 comments:

  1. Great attempt. I love the first one.
    You really try to create an imagery here.If I may suggest - In the second one, try using just one seasonal reference than both raindrops and wet earth - It will have a greater impact !

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  2. Beautiful. I love the first one. It's beautiful to feel and watch rain in summers.

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  3. Beautiful set and apt pics too! :)

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  4. Excellent, I can never master Haikus but admire anyone who can.

    Yvonne.

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